Monday, 22 September 2014

Expanded Noun Phrases 4JP

We are learning about "expanded noun phrases" in SPAG this week.  Here we have expanded the nouns in the sentence:

The lady crossed the road.

Evie - Slowly but surely the old, crooked, bent lady crossed the jet-black concrete road that had a long line of cars that stretched into the distance.

Jack - Angrily, the old, hag lady bent across the tidy, neat road.

Alice - Suddenly the wrinkly, short woman decided to cross the hard, old road while the lights were not even red.

Molly - The large woman walked funnily across the old, concrete road as the birds stared at her.

Jorja - The well-dressed lady walked across the busy, bustling road.

Aadi - The cool, funky lady crossed the wide, jet-black road so she could go to the busy shops.

Georgia - The tall, young lady with bags around her arms and one big grinning smile across her face crossed the busy, wide road.

Ellis - The small, old lady slowly walked across the long, vast road.

Can you write your own sentence in the comments expanding the nouns in the original sentence?

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