Multi Sensory Locational Writing - Entering King Tut's Tomb 4CP

We have been doing some MSLW, here are some snippets of the children's shared learning.

Erin and Tallie

I smelt the musty air rushing up to my face, it nearly blew me away.

Kaitlyn

I could hear the ancient people from The Valley of the Kings calling me as I went further and further into the tomb.

Max and Jacob

As Howard Carter went into the tomb of Tutankhamen he saw desecrated artefacts, they glimmered in front of him.

Harry and Jack

As I slowly walked through the door I heard the ancient doors creak as soft as a mermaids call.

Olivia, Charlotte and Sienna

As we walked down the deep, steep stairs we came across an ancient, rusty, dusty door.

Vishal and Katie

Anxiously I slowly strolled down the damp, cold, steep steps and came across a giant worn out door with a mysterious, grey rope.

Annaliese and Kyira

As I walked into Tutankhamen’s tomb I was speechless because gold treasures surrounded me.

Rania and Sam

Suddenly, I heard the rusty, ancient door creak like a haunted house.

Ben

I can see a very dark, gloomy room.

Ethan and Halle

As I opened the cold door I could see gold, silver and shiny treasures surrounding Tutankhamen. I was so amazed.

Maisy and Daniel

As we entered the huge, musty burial chamber there were petrifying threadbare artefacts.

Zoe and Morgan

I could smell the burning candle through the door.

Jack and Tom

After years of working really hard I finally got this moment to go down the steps and there I saw the awesome, amazing, spectacular Tutankhamen’s tomb.

Jasmine and Nyle

Just before I entered Tutankhamen’s dusty, ancient tomb I was delirious with excitement.

Charlie

As I waddled precariously down the deep 16 steps I realised about 5 astonishing, astounding artefacts.

Rachel

My candle quivered in the threadbare tomb.

Joe

When I reached the bottom of the steps I was flummoxed with the style of the lock.