Wednesday 17 December 2014

Guess Who? 4JP


Year 4 have been writing fantasy descriptions.  Last week they wrote fantasy world multi-sensory locational writing. This week the focus is on fantasy character descriptions.  Can you work out which fantasy character these 3 descriptions are about?

Aadi
With a sudden pop, standing in front of the young boy was a lean, mysterious creature with white, ripped robes.  His hands were like an ironed cloth.  His eyes shimmered like a lake.  The small-but-ugly creature stared at the boy as if he wanted to tell him something urgent.  His wrinkly, pointed ears were as long as a thorn.  His head shined in the light because it was bald.  His toes were really long and dirty like a used saucepan.

Georgia
With a pop, standing in front of the boy was an unusual creature; short and pointy-eared with wide, purple eyes like he hadn't slept for days.  He looked so lean and wrinkly, he almost looked completely like an old man.  The little creature was wearing an old, ruined robe but his brown, knobbly knees were still visible.

Ellis
With a pop, standing in front of the boy was an unusual creature.  It was wrinkled all over and had big, pointy, sloppy ears and a tanned, rough face.  His eyes were a glistening emerald and he had stubby, skinny knees.  He didn't have a single hair on his bald head.  His eyes were swirling like a shiny coin being tossed.  He had small, ugly, dirty and smelly feet.

Sophie
With a pop, standing in front of the boy was an unusual creature which had knobbly elbows and knees and a ripped robe covering his brown body.  This creature had a pointy nose as long as a small pencil.  Its ears were just as long but more wrinkly.  He had a long, lean neck and he was as tall as a small child.  His eyes glistened like a sapphire, clear, diamond river.  The toe-nails on his small, skinny feet were a dirty brown colour.

Guess who in the comments below!

1 comment :

  1. It must be one of the favourites in the Thompson household - DOBBY!!
    Lovely descriptions - well done all.

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