We came up with words to describe how it looks and how we feel having found it.
- broken,
- dusty,
- excited,
- speechless,
- astonished,
- amazed,
- tense,
- ancient,
- crazy,
- petrified,
- cold,
- mysterious,
- dull,
- tight,
- wooden,
- bland,
- strong,
- rickety,
- clinging,
- rusty,
- old.
Then we wrote some Super Sentences using these words and others to describe the tomb seal and our feelings about it.
- It was dark and lonely when I went down the steps. (Hannah B)
- Then suddenly I saw a door. I was exhilarated and I tried not to go too crazy. (Will B)
- I walked down the steps and I was astonished at how the rope was tied. (Ben)
- As I walked down the fragile, small, cold steps, I was astonished. (Finlay - LIST)
- As I stumbled down the slippery, sandy steps, I saw a big, wooden door with a huge handle. (Georgia - LIST)
- As I led myself down from Cairo, every second I got more and more excited. (Conor).
- Worried and petrified, I opened the dull, wooden door. (Alice - ED)
- As I walked down the mysterious, musty bland steps, I saw an old, wooden, rusty door. (Josie - LIST)
- As I touched the door, it rattled like round, green peas in a pod yet somehow it stayed shut. (Lydia - SIMILE, LIST, BOYS).
- As I stepped down the sixteen s#steps, I felt a cold, cautious feeling inside of me. (Harry - LIST).
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